Biogenic isoprene emissions driven by regional weather predictions using different initialization methods: case studies during the SEAC<sup>4</sup>RS and DISCOVER-AQ airborne campaigns

Huang, Min; Carmichael, Gregory R.; Crawford, James H.; Wisthaler, Armin; Zhan, Xiwu; Hain, Christopher R.; Lee, Pius; Guenther, Alex B.

doi:https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-10-3085-2017

Volume 10, issue 8

Geosci. Model Dev., 10, 3085-3104, 2017
https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-10-3085-2017
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Model evaluation paper 21 Aug 2017

Model evaluation paper | 21 Aug 2017

Biogenic isoprene emissions driven by regional weather predictions using different initialization methods: case studies during the SEAC⁴RS and DISCOVER-AQ airborne campaigns

Min Huang et al.

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RC1: 'Review of doi:10.5194/gmd-2017-13 by Huang et al.', Anonymous Referee #1, 21 Apr 2017
RC2: 'Review of Huang et al. GMD 2017', Anonymous Referee #2, 31 May 2017
AC1: 'Response to both Referees' comments', Min Huang, 23 Jun 2017

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AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision

AR by Min Huang on behalf of the Authors (24 Jun 2017) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (26 Jun 2017) by Gerd A. Folberth

RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (09 Jul 2017)

Suggestions for revision or reasons for rejection

My only substantive comments have to do with Table 2 and the discussion around PBLH. It is not clear to me why no attempt was made to compare the modeled PBLH to the DIAL-HSRL data, given the authors have access to these data and show them in Fig. 2a. They already extract other variables along the flight track, so also extract PBLH and providing some quantitative evaluation against the measurements seems both feasible and necessary.

Along these lines, the Table 2 & 3 captions are not correct (with current table contents), as they state they show the ‘air temperature and PBLH performance’ – but in reality they show air temperature performance and modeled PBLH values (not performance as it has not be evaluated). Of course, if this is changed the include PBLH comparison metrics against the observations, this point is no longer relevant.

Finally, it is not clear why Table 2 does not show the surface air temperature mean bias like Table 3 does. I do not see any reason for these two tables to use different temperature metrics.

Minor comments:
P6 L20-21: Add the reference provided in the response to reviewers

P7 L3: Rate constant should be in scientific notation: 1.01x10^-10

P7 L5: after qualitatively evaluated --> after qualitative evaluation OR after being qualitatively evaluated

P7 L20: accuracy of +/-5% -- is there a reference for this?

P7 L30: north to --> north of

P7 L34: located in downtown Houston area --> located in downtown Houston OR located in the downtown Houston area

P8 L1: suggest replacing biogenic with isoprene here, as monoterpene emissions are not necessarily at a miminum overnight

P8 L15: in the eastern Texas --> in eastern Texas

P8 L17: missing units for predicted OH value on 11 Sep

P8 L18 of the close magnitudes --> close in magnitude

P8 L21: range from --> ranged from

P8 L22: along the P-3B -- missing a word; perhaps along the P-3B flight track?

P10 L3: on a specific day of 11 September --> on the specific day of 11 September, or better yet just on 11 September

P10 L10: at around the Conroe site --> around the Conroe site

P10 L20: same comment as before about changing biogenic to isoprene (or biogenic isoprene)

P11 L22: significantly changes --> significant changes

P12 L28 & elsewhere: daytime-integrated emissions are mentioned but never provided. A table with these values would make the text in this section easier to follow.

P14 L22: radiation product --> radiation products

P15 L13: could the 10-20% overestimate of the observation-derived estimates explain some of the previously described underestimate of the 4-km run? This would be worth noting.

P15 L20: of the similar magnitude --> of similar magnitude

P16 L6: Suggest starting a new paragraph at ‘This study emphasizes the importance…’

P16 L14: variability of the atmospheric composition --> variability of atmospheric composition

P34 Fig. 8 caption: Specify that the model results are from the 12 km NUWRF ctrl run. Also comparing with should be compared with.

P35 Table 1 caption: descriptions on --> descriptions of

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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (Editor review) (10 Jul 2017) by Gerd A. Folberth

AR by Min Huang on behalf of the Authors (13 Jul 2017) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Publish as is (17 Jul 2017) by Gerd A. Folberth

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